Have you ever met a guy that just gave you the creepy-crawlies all over? Well, here are three that give Lila the total ick factor. When I thought about Max’s sidekicks, I thought Texas Chain Saw Massacre. ***shrugs*** Remember those creepy peeps?
My eyes went from Max to his best man, Jasper Gips, nicknamed Coon, and his shiny balding head. It gleamed under the lights. Long, stringy strands of hair touched his collar. All ten of them. I flared my nostrils in disgust and hoped no one noticed. You should’ve kept your Buccaneers ball cap on.
Thank God, the usual tobacco wad that poked out of his cheek was gone. No Slurpee cup at his side to spit in. He smiled and showed off a black hole. Dressing up didn’t help him at all.
Coon spit tobacco into a Slurpee cup. Jimmy Hurley stood next to him, gawking. Max and his pals called him Cockroach. The nickname suited him. The rims of his eyes were always red and so were his nose holes. He was skinny and sick-looking, and he twitched a lot. The only thing missing were his bug feelers.
Vinnie stood on the other side of Cockroach and puckered his lips into a kiss at me.
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As young adults my husband and I went to see the original TX chainsaw massacre. I could only watch half of it, I was terrified. But my macho husband actually got sick at his stomach.
ReplyDeleteAn ick experience.
Teresa
Yes. Terrifying. In fact, when I finally watched it it was in my house. It made me pace in front of the television.
DeleteI have to agree on the Texas Chainsaw, creepy feeling. There is also something creepy about seeing pics of Charles Mason too.
ReplyDeleteYeah. Charles Manson is an other-worldly-creepy-kind.
DeleteYeah, LOL, those are 2 keepers for sure. Even their names match.
ReplyDeleteClaire:
DeleteWhat should we keep them in? Tupperware? A coffin, perhaps?
LOL yeah there is sure an ick factor to the texas chainsaw massacre, real life crazies like that are quite ick too..haha
ReplyDeleteI live in Pasco Co., Florida. The ick factor on men here is quite high.
DeleteWe think you went out of your way to make these guys revolting...
ReplyDeleteWhat makes you think that, Scarlett and James?
DeleteJust the name Cockroach gaves me the heebeejeebees.
ReplyDeletewelcome to me
yummy stuff
Thank you for coming by today, Ruth.
DeleteThose are definitely repulsive characters.
ReplyDeleteGolden: Yup. Repulsive. Very repulsive all through the novel, too.
DeleteIck pretty much says it. It feels like reading Mickey Spillane.
ReplyDeleteShelly,
ReplyDeleteYeah, "grody" is the right word! Yuck! Good descriptions.
Characters like that are fun to create.
Yes they are.
DeleteVery descriptive.
ReplyDeleteCharmaine:
DeleteThanks for coming by. It's always great to get feedback form your peers.
Great icky excerpts.
ReplyDeleteI have two icky characters in my current WIP. It's both fun and gross writing them.
Medeia: It is rather fun making up these guys.
DeleteEwe, grody is right. Awesome job making us feel that!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Kimberly.
DeleteEwwwwwwww! Vividly described, and definitely grody.
ReplyDeleteShannon at The Warrior Muse, co-host of the 2012 #atozchallenge! Twitter: @AprilA2Z
Shannon:
DeleteThank you.
These characters definitely fit the bill, Shelly! Beyond ick!
ReplyDeleteYes, Sir Wills, way beyond.
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